Good bye then,
I could not never pretend
To need to depend on anyone...
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From beginning to end this piece is raw and honest. A fitting title for what you've expressed here. Excellent beginning and beautiful acknowledgements throughout. The last stanza is especially clever. Thanks for sharing.
A deep and honest emotional write with the last stanza deeply lyrical, mellifluous and introspective. A pleasure shared, thank you.
Is poetry, music, talent, all mixed. Much to learn from you Great Poet! ! ! ! !
Its like a cantata played in Italian opera sometimes back what i visited when someone reads it musically.Poetry on its way to a carnival.What more can one say when words fail in frailty to acknowledge the beauty in it.A hearts introspection or rather its mirror image of unstoppability could not have been better unless your write here Sir.Its like a discovery rediscovered.Spanking! and i did check the website.Could have been better your voice on poetry nevertheless good or bad rather than background music which i am not sure if yours also.
Now that's definitely what I call A Heart that's Talking my friend. It's refreshing to have found a kindred spirit who understands how poetry is ment to be written. And you sir must have a beautiful soul when this is the product thereof, and it's one that I can fully understand and sympathize. =)