Sunday, June 17, 2007

A Heart's Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

Over the ocean, its waves are silent where they sleep;
a pleasing yellow orb of fire drops down to be swallowed by the ocean.
The orb's rays of light slice through the water.
Down and deeper it cuts
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natalie vail
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Jesse Tampa 31 October 2007

This is a rele nice poem! I made a wish one time while I was standing on a beach shore and I was watching the sunset. It was a pretty wild day.

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Kim Billings 12 July 2007

u should make a really creepy poem about the dark and like being alone when u do like email me! ! kim

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