Friday, February 22, 2008

A Heart Or A Hole? Comments

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Is what i have a heart? or is it a hole? i dont really know...
but i am sure it is a heart for if it wasnt i dont think i would feel it breaking
you broke my heart and now there is a hole....
so big you could fit...
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Kasi Navadomskis
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Keith Hendrickson 19 June 2009

another great piece. i like the way you began the piece and ended, , , great work

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 23 May 2009

I am sorry that you heart is now a hole; it is empty, it is gone and the body is now heartless. Good luck and be strong.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 September 2008

Simple and nice poem, wel done.

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Emo Seb 25 February 2008

deep, man, real deep...(lol) ...it touched my heart (lol again) ...but, fer real, i love it!

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Li Away 22 February 2008

'you broke my heart and now there is a hole.... so big you could fit...' a beautiful sad line

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