Tuesday, October 12, 2010

A Heart Like A Clown Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a sadly joke,
your love made fun at me.
I felt my heart like a clown,
With lots of smiles and laughters
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Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
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Shadow Girl 04 May 2011

Wow! Great poem. Full of emotion and meaning. Great imagery. Fantastic!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 23 April 2011

it is sad. but i like the lines, 'i trusted what I read in your eyes, and every single word from your lips' you see, loving is trusting so much, and you won't believe other people, maybe that is what you did, if ever your story did not make it to happy ending, at least you have done your part. also love is a gamble and you are not sure what will happen at the end... so just think of it that way.. these are what i thought of after reading your nicely written poem.

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