Sunday, January 10, 2010

A Heart And A Question! Comments

Rating: 4.7

Why did you trespass
The boundaries set by my heart?
You became an intruder,
Like a burglar at midnight
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Romeo Della Valle
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Heather Wilkins 15 June 2013

beautiful write Romeo. very touching and emotional.

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Katherine Land 05 May 2011

Bravo! I really felt this. My heart broke, then I got stronger with you! <3

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 February 2010

very well expressed poem right from the heart

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Ritty Patnaik 18 February 2010

a heartfelt love poem.....enjoyed it through! best wishes.....ritty

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Kobik William 21 January 2010

Very good poem. I wouldn't want to be in those shoes though!

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Indira Renganathan 15 January 2010

A nice and frank output of a heart true to practicality...thank you

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Timothy Venard 14 January 2010

quite a unique way of looking at things, it's a beutiful paice, and you should be proud,10

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Chitra - 12 January 2010

the poem is simply superb! A reflective write on life and its dimensions! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 January 2010

well expressed! gotta rate it 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 January 2010

This is really a heart-felt poem, Romeo. Love makes a person the one and unique...10/10. Regards. Naseer

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Emu Getachew 11 January 2010

Your ability to express your despair through words is apparent. The beauties of life’s experiences are never far away from words and you my friend are wordsmith. Thanks for the invite.

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Bill Khaki 11 January 2010

i like the ending of the poem a good resolution to the whole tension set before. keep it up buddy and stay blessed.

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Mohammed Hassan 11 January 2010

that is so amazing i love it and the words you used are so brilliant and it's all about the brain not the heart, hearts don't love brains who tell who to love and who to hate keep it up 10++++

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Lady Grace 11 January 2010

ok, this is fine...u can't question the heart coz it can detect..the piece is very catching..it is very nice..

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Ronn Michael Salinas 10 January 2010

'The one and only'. That could be interpreted a lot of different ways.

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Nikunj Sharma 10 January 2010

this is truly a marvel of words and an ocean of deep meanings, written with simplicity and careful tact, the poem is simply superb....I really liked it...and u are ONE AND THE ONLY ONE....

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Noel Horlanda 10 January 2010

lovely lines, smooth flowing and easy to grasp. The lesson we get from this particularly the male population is, next time don't be fooled because of physical beauty. Be wise enough, be clever and smart. As the saying goes 'do unto others before they do unto you.'

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Ramin Chaman 10 January 2010

Hi Romeo Now, of life, I am very proud, No more tears or feeling lonely, Because of you, I became, 'The One and Only'... ....... well seeming..and full well Romeo..10

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A raw, rabid reality poured out with the pain of a broken heart. Well done my friend.

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Ivor Hogg 10 January 2010

sadly so often true we fall prey to nefarious intentions. but we learn by experience

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