Why did you trespass
The boundaries set by my heart?
You became an intruder,
Like a burglar at midnight
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Bravo! I really felt this. My heart broke, then I got stronger with you! <3
a heartfelt love poem.....enjoyed it through! best wishes.....ritty
Very good poem. I wouldn't want to be in those shoes though!
A nice and frank output of a heart true to practicality...thank you
quite a unique way of looking at things, it's a beutiful paice, and you should be proud,10
the poem is simply superb! A reflective write on life and its dimensions! !
This is really a heart-felt poem, Romeo. Love makes a person the one and unique...10/10. Regards. Naseer
Your ability to express your despair through words is apparent. The beauties of life’s experiences are never far away from words and you my friend are wordsmith. Thanks for the invite.
i like the ending of the poem a good resolution to the whole tension set before. keep it up buddy and stay blessed.
that is so amazing i love it and the words you used are so brilliant and it's all about the brain not the heart, hearts don't love brains who tell who to love and who to hate keep it up 10++++
ok, this is fine...u can't question the heart coz it can detect..the piece is very catching..it is very nice..
'The one and only'. That could be interpreted a lot of different ways.
this is truly a marvel of words and an ocean of deep meanings, written with simplicity and careful tact, the poem is simply superb....I really liked it...and u are ONE AND THE ONLY ONE....
lovely lines, smooth flowing and easy to grasp. The lesson we get from this particularly the male population is, next time don't be fooled because of physical beauty. Be wise enough, be clever and smart. As the saying goes 'do unto others before they do unto you.'
Hi Romeo Now, of life, I am very proud, No more tears or feeling lonely, Because of you, I became, 'The One and Only'... ....... well seeming..and full well Romeo..10
A raw, rabid reality poured out with the pain of a broken heart. Well done my friend.
sadly so often true we fall prey to nefarious intentions. but we learn by experience
beautiful write Romeo. very touching and emotional.