Tuesday, April 6, 2010

A Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Enlighten or darken
Hallowed or filled with emotions
In peace or in peices
What to do when its broken?
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Elisha De La Rosa
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2010

Keep it safe, for the currupted won't touch Your heart is your treasure, your crown...yes it is treasure and ladies must preserve it...lovely poem dear....10 read mine i miss... miss i miss u.. anywhere///color

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Samuel Popeil 21 April 2010

expressive and true. good from start to end.

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A heart touching poem my friend.

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Jester's P 18 April 2010

The poem reminded me of my unpleasant experiences -the separation of my parents, the death of my only sister and another death of my brother... Indeed 'A heart' is a venue of many splendid realities in life. However one thing is for sure and that is heart is in-motion (emotion) that allows growth and maturity, to live life in the fullest… And in the poem theses possibilities are depicted. All the best

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Adrian Cordova 16 April 2010

It captures the heart, it captures emotions, it captures the true essence of the heart!

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