Sunday, December 5, 2004

A Heart Comments

Rating: 1.5

What do you do?
That gets me stuck on you,

Why does it always end like this?
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James Lee Watts
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Fidelis Patronus 08 December 2004

You have strong feelings I can see. You just need to learn how to put them in words better. Your rhymes are a bit to easy. More rythem and complicated words would sound much better!

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James Lee Watts

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