Thursday, April 9, 2009

A Healthy Life Aria Comments

Rating: 3.3

who knows?
keep writing!
keep on rhyming!
enjoy your life!
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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‘who we are? /we are poets/what we do? /we paint words’ A Tall Yeah… ‘Poets enliven words Poets bring life to dead words Poets add jingle to words Poets bring vive in heart of readers Finally Poets merges with and in words’ ~ niv Excellent poem Sir 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Joshua Whiting 14 November 2009

Lilting, staccato, cresendo, decresendo - Aria Arbitrio! stay positive, Joshua C.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2009

who knows? keep writing! keep on rhyming! enjoy your life! .................keep on moving.keep on writing ..some day it will pay...bneautiful write....10 read mine not easy...open page... beauty

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Obinna Eruchie 13 September 2009

A befitting piece for dedication.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 May 2009

Thank you for your kindness to dedicate this poem to me. Only you are a blessed one to write such powerful poems. May God bless you with all the fortunes you richly deserve for your sincere and kind heart.

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Eyan Desir 23 April 2009

Well done Dear poet Beautiful writtin

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Malini Kadir 22 April 2009

natural, casual.......presentation..... sweeping all the poets hearts no doubt!

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Lee Crowell 18 April 2009

we need encouragement and inspiration thanks for this

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<font color =fusha>Amy 17 April 2009

Amazing poem and very beautiful

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Sabrina Jubahar 17 April 2009

beautiful piece! really makes me happy of being a poet! ! i really like it!

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wow, i don't think i've ever read such a lovely poem with such friendly advice on life...good read and maybe u should write more poems like these, i think these might be ur best to write. thanks for sharing -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

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Dhanesh Aradhye 14 April 2009

keep singing, keep dancing, keep drawing and plz plz plz.. keep writing and sharing these b'ful poems.... thnks.. :)

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Antonio Liao 14 April 2009

a poem of a poet....everything seems alright....and beautiful as a child ....a poem that gives us inspiration....an outlooks that apoet have to stand..thank you my friend for sharing this precious thought of yours....God bless a 10+

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Victor Sklyarov 13 April 2009

A very optimistic and healthy poem. +10

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Joseph Poewhit 13 April 2009

Speaks well of us poets in the center ring of the poetry circus. POPCORN - CRACKERJACKS - ICE CREAM - SODA - etc - etc. [ the show must go on ]

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Reshma Ramesh 13 April 2009

a positive flow............well penned

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Naidz Ladia 13 April 2009

beautiful poem..well written...another poem with full of sense dear, , , i like the presentation of this poem, ..very casual...i like this piece.. naizz

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Eyan Desir 13 April 2009

Sweet flow great work 10

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Muhammad Ali 13 April 2009

Sweet state of presence, i can enjoy while reading this nice poem bro 10

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Supriya Prathapan 13 April 2009

How often do we forget that we are mortals after all. Its important to relish each moment of life.10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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