Monday, December 9, 2013

A Headlong Plunge Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swaddled in frozen silence
In a weather so dolorous and damp
The pores of her mind sweat painful memories
Which take a headlong flight
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Valsa George
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Indira Renganathan 27 February 2019

A dolorous mood and the painful memories....the heavy perplexity of the mind is sometimes likely to result in delirious as well as dangerous act...no wonder " she plunges into an abysmal pit To be choked there in whirling gloom! " ....A well thought out work Valsa...10++++

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A sad reminiscence brought her headlong to the gloom once experienced.......Valsa.......metaphor so finely adopted makes the piece vibrant and lively...........

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Akhtar Jawad 10 June 2014

If someone is asleep or not completely awaken the memories become an in-disciplined crowd. Some times these memories are mixed in the sub-conscious grinder and a very abnormal shake is prepared. Some times it is furious and sometimes it is funny.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

An amazing, just amazing piece of writing

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Rubab Atwal 21 December 2013

beautiful poem....loved it.

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Scotty Dogg 14 December 2013

Terrific poem about confusion and doubt. Nice.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 December 2013

If one falls into the whirlpool of depression, it is really very difficult to come out. One strong support can do much. Unfortunately that support may be responsible for all this. Its not sure where this depression will lead too. Beautiful write Valsa. This poem took me far away.. Loved it.

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Patricia Grantham 12 December 2013

Comparing an apparent bout of depression with other happenings and depicts how hurtful this condition can be. It is like a whirlpool that sucks us in where one can feel that he or she may never rise out of. One has to persevere. A good write this is!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 10 December 2013

The course of the gloom well said

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

The verse story told in the present indefinite giving it a dramatic touch! ! !

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Dinesan Madathil 09 December 2013

It is a pity that she has has fallen headlong into the abysmal pits. But the hope has it that she will bounce back to the surging waves to reach the shores..

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Hazel Durham 09 December 2013

Depression takes it's own course with uncontrollable thoughts, that bring us on a painful journey without our permission, we duck and dive but allow it to overtake us as we accept it's powerful control. Superb write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 December 2013

Memories and thoughts may be uncontrollable at times. This state is described comparing with uncomfortable weather, unruly steeds, whirl of a vortex in beautiful lines. Nice poem.

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