A Head Of Wrought Comments

A beautiful outpouring here, should I say that? I mean, you say it so eloquently even though your heart is full of woe. Well done you and here's a cyber hug in case you need it.. HG: -) xx

It's what you don't say that is communicated so effectively and painfully in this brilliant poem about loss and homesickness and despair. You use landscape to evoke mood and say so much more because of it. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

What a brilliant clever poem. As I come from Australia, and you must have been visiting, I can relate so well to the word drought. You weave words to uniquely lead the words to 'a head'. Excellent work! Karin Anderson

Five lines only but so charged... heavy words hanging on every line... all well ballanced, impressive, depressing