A Hawk (Haiku Haiku Haiku Haiku Haiku) Comments

Using the eye of a hawk ensure that nothing is missed and very poem need such a tool.

i could see why someone would rate this a three (3) . but i'm not trying to find fault. reading the other comment, which mentions haiku helps explain. i don't have much experience with haiku, but i don't know that i've ever read one that i did like. but thanks for sharing.....i guess. does it have to do with a pair of hawks hunting? ? i love birds.

Haiku uhm? Nicely written.