A Haunting Melody Comments

(continued) ...su·sur·rate ˈso͞osəˌrāt/ verb literary (of leaves, wind, etc.) make a whispering or rustling sound. and ....medly? ? ? perhaps medley? ? ? then again, ? i think i always have trouble spelling icicles! ! ! but now i've just found a solution. i'll think of circles, minus the r, but with i in front. bri :)

some favorite lines: Raking…. Up spine and then Spider cross brain ..................and a very fine alliteration(s) here: Sursurrant sounds That surge...but i found sursurrate, when i Googled for the meaning of sursurrant: (to be continued) ....

Hearing the whispers beneath the melody, a true musician can hear them! Loved the rhythm and symmetry of this poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

Beautiful imagery write. Loved reading.

Nice poem i used it for my school poem recital my teacher loved it i think Lets say i might be ten

Nice poem i used it for my school poem recital my teacher loved it i think Lets say i might be ten

Beautiful poem, lovely to read. Very imaginative write.