Thursday, June 27, 2019

A Haunting Comments

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His footprints next to mine in the snow,
The wildflowers he picked for my hair;
The kiss we shared 'neath the moon's pale glow....
That kiss that left me gasping for air
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Bri Edwards 01 August 2019

1 - to MyPoemList! ! no big surprise, that! She Dreamt …..[ My Response To Lora Colon’s Very Fine P H Poem: “A Haunting”; Love ] She Dreamt. She was so haunted by memories so, so untrue, as sometimes dreamt by others, perhaps by YOU? Shared precious non-moments she had with ‘him’, romantic moments based on hopes so, so slim.

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Bipasha D 02 July 2019

I liked the 1st and 2nd stanzas most. The imagery used is quite appealing.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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