Saturday, January 7, 2017

A Haunted Deja-Vu Comments

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When you leave a room forever
(As a hotel room, or a waiting room in some foreign town) ,
Though you know you may never go there again,
It pull's on your mind's substance, somehow
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Patti Masterman
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Abdul Hamid Abdullah 02 April 2017

Yes indeed, prickling at our brains; like a lost deja-vu. What was left unsaid, undone through inadvertence or just due to being in a strait-jacket of sorts. Love and regards and would love to hear you again. Nick The Second

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Pamela Sinicrope 07 March 2017

Yes, a haunted deja vu. I like this idea. Makes sense to me. I especially liked these lines: Imagining we are within feet of others, who should have inhabited All our waking days; or near the grave of someone Hidden beneath our sight, who should have been Thanks for sharing Patti.

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Smoky Hoss 27 January 2017

Simply amazing; and you are correct. I love the way you have framed this spiritual sensation with just the right words. You've captured it's essence perfectly, and given it to us as a beautiful gift. Thank you.

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