Tuesday, September 1, 2009

A Haunt's Hush. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Diamonds of creamed
............................... misty-pearl
Hang in the dank air.
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Fay Slimm
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C. P. Sharma 14 September 2009

'Behold her single in the field, Yon solitary highland lass ...............or gently pass' WORDSWORTH I was lost in the music of your poem and the beauty of metaphors, epithets and trasferred eithets you have used. Excellent poetry. CP

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Daniel Kempson 02 September 2009

A beautil poem Fay thank you for asking me to read will pay attention to your work in the future 10 Daniel now off to work

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Fay Slimm

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