A Hate To Hate Comments

Your poem really shows so many fantastic things in our life. So intelligent and so charming! Dreams and reality just like the twin sisters always playing together but sometimes they would get angry with each other. Their game is a joke. We need to learn and work on it. A beautiful one....

This one is really good with lots and lots of wisdom in it. If we can avoid the rage, have the courage, all so important. I like the stanza also very much that ends in rhymes on strife. I really believe in having no secrets for our wives. If we are not open and honest to our very closest relatives, who do we have to trust? I enjoyed all the wisdom and melodiousness of this poem thorougly. Very wel done.

Reality and not the dreams It has to be like sun beams..... only dreams may not work at all....10