A Hate, Love Syndrome Comments

ut up, shut up, shut up and go away” I threw the stone at crow to scare away It was disturbing me with unpleasant voice It was making me irritant with noise............very nice placement of words and indeed very true....10

Overall, poem seems to discern rightly, leaves that impression. For some unknown reason we all seem to find crows interesting. They seem rather otherworldly. Outdoorsy if nothing else. Kind of remarkable. Seems that many famous poets have written about them. And now you, too.

this piece is nice...length cant destruct the meaning....well done...i want to quote this line..''shut up...shut up....'...actually, this expression made me think of my best friend here...sorrrrryyyyyyy for the words my dearest....i'll not say it again, promise... and this piece? ..of course...so nice...