A Hard Sighs Comments

A beautifully written poem

I really like the format of this poem. Very nice work! .........

beautifully penned.......................

Being humans... such a paradox of being just ' humans' Our feelings traps us most of the times.

a sad and touching poem

Hazem....another passionate plea from a man who has expreienced the hardship of nights and days....a life spent feeling alone...its ok..you are not the only one....many of us share this collective emotion...feeling...remember this when you are suffering...we are all one...together in our aloneness.

Hazem this is beautiful. Now, it's official, i'm in love with ur poems, the way u write, and the feeling contained in those words.

Really Its great poem i like it soooo much and i live it Its have strong passion and i wish that u feel in these words in ur heart

I think you're poems are wonderful! so much passion in so many words. Its adorible how you write. I love them all.. keep it up*Samantha*

Ahh this poem is so true. Although life is rough we must sail through it with flying colors. Nice Work. -Kathryn

A wise woman once told me that God never promised his faithful that life would be easy, only that it would be worth it. Still the trials and hardships of this life often leave us heartbroken and hopeless. You have done a fine job of getting your message across here, I really like the format of this poem. Very nice work! Blessings-TGR

There is a saying. “Life is hard. Then you die.” Your poem has a fatalistic element that I hope does not reflect your life. Good work.

Life is hard, but we can make it better ^-^. I myself am going through a hard time. Even i have to remind myself that it is ok. -Kat

Oh, love is great and so assuring and so pleasurable and it means your life, until it turns out badly and it is like your heart has ceased to beat and the pain is unbearable.....yes and when we write about it it all comes upon us again, the pain. Very well written.