A Hard Goodbye Comments

I wrote a similiar poem once from the opposite perspective and even though it was a super dark time for me and i made alot of mistakes i came out the other side a better man. But not a day goes by im not reminded of how close and special we were...great poem hope both of u are doing well

Hmmm, that makes me feel sad. But you can't do anything when you're heart is no longer in it. You know in the end that you did the right thing.

EXCELLENT poem..............love it.........a few stanzas reminds me of rihanna's unfaithful........... BRILLIANT one.......... ;)

Brianna a really poigant poem crafted with flow, precision, and emotion, , words not from the pen but from the heart...a poetess at her best....

it happens all the time i love the way you told the story of a gentle breakup, such pain for something so simple

you are an amazing writter im sitting here in tears it reminds me of when i was broken hearted.... thank-you you can read mine if you want to... x

This brought tears to my eyes and we all can relate to this. Oh how sad i hope and pray you won't fall for him again. It truly is the worst feeling in the world!

saying goodbye is the hardest thing of this life but sometimes we have to say it to someone we really love for his good.. sad but great poem..

I very much enjoyed how you conveyed that saying goodbye is very hard. It is something that many people find hard to cope with, as do I.

a hard but good rhyming good bye...beautiful narrative style, Brianna...you lead the readers fluently till the end of your write...good piece...10

Brianna I really liked your story and I do know how hard it is to say goodbye, especially when we are the one's doing the breaking up... Welcome to this site... Karin Anderson

It's so good! 10/10! Good Job!

love the rhyming in the second and fourth lines nice...i give it a nice 9

Very good..To be someone who has just started you have very good rhyming skills.....Thanks for sharing -Brie

Very nice. I liked it, had a good rym sceam!

Brianna a beautiful poem written about a first love loss and with a happy hopeful ending. i loved it great write keep up the awesome work.