Sunday, March 8, 2009

A Hard Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.8

I will not cry when you leave
I will suffer, I will die
But for you... I will smile
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Sonya Florentino
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fleur de lys 15 December 2009

I think you have described perfect love.

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Viola Grey 13 March 2009

it takes intense pride to be this noble....I really like this one...it's strong, yet very sad.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 March 2009

A goodbye is always very hard but your smile will sublime the moment. Nice little poem, Sonya. Beautiful and meaningful. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sandra Fowler 09 March 2009

That smile may be remembred long after your good-bye is forgotten. Your bravery becomes you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Indira Renganathan 08 March 2009

Very apt title..good writing

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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