Friday, March 21, 2008

A Hard Climb Comments

Rating: 5.0

The frill of trees jig their lady skirts
about their knees, buckling
under the weight of the wind’s hard approach.
When we exhale, our breaths dangle,
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Caroline Misner
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Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

I agree with Roger, this feels a whole new experience, and you took us there all the way with such well chosen words, honed to perfection Caroline. thank you, and |I simply must have this one too for my favourite list. 10+ + + from Fay.

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Bob Blackwell 03 June 2008

Having hiked and climbed up many mountain paths I can appreciate the beauty of your climb and also the reward when summit reached. I love mountains and I love your description as well. thank you for this lovely poem. Bob

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Roger Cornish 21 March 2008

This is wonderful! Is it new? It feels, somehow aged? R.

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