Thursday, February 5, 2009

A Happy Tune Comments

Rating: 4.9

I was just sitting here doing my thing
Whistling a tune, started to sing
When all of a sudden, I realised
Why it's our song I am singing
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Tia Maria
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Excellent. O the power of true love! The song of love. I enjoyed the read! Good one

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Catrina Heart 19 February 2009

A poem so short but woven with fine rhymes and rhythm, it whistles hope love and happiness..well done...10+++++++++

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

You show you are a strong woman in this Tia, keep singing and smiling 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm 07 February 2009

Keep singing that last line Tia. girl - - and your wish should really come true -lovely verse 10 from Fay

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Marvin Brato 06 February 2009

T ruly this one is great love poem i can relate to its sensitivity a nd the zest it contains

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 February 2009

very true.....smooth and beautiful creation...

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Fiona Davidson 05 February 2009

True love will always find a way through...thank you...Fi 10+

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Robert Jaffray 05 February 2009

A lovely tune to sing........Robert

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 February 2009

Keep singing, those happy tunes...

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