Friday, January 17, 2014

A Happy Retreat Comments

Rating: 5.0

A happy retreat

Sultry summer day;
Cloudless deep blue sky
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 April 2014

Many many thanks.....Valsa.....I am humbled.................

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Valsa George 28 April 2014

This is just lovely Deepak.... In the sweltering heat, a hide out in Nature's wilderness is cooling and equally mind filling with the song of birds, the music of the running brook and chirping of crickets! Enjoyed much... A 10 for this sweet write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 January 2014

Many many thanks...........Dinesh Ji........I am very much obliged.............

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Dinesan Madathil 17 January 2014

The charms of nature have ever been our fortress of imagination and here you have done a superb job of a poet. The diction, the style and the very structure go hand in hand and this poem is one of the best on nature over this forum.

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