Thursday, July 30, 2009

! ! A Happy Person Comments

Rating: 3.7

Storm blown ripples
line my weathered brow,
face a map of life’s journey,
of striving, disappointments
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Bob Blackwell
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Nalini Hebbar 14 October 2009

in present moment, for as each moment dies, for me, a new one is born....i love these lines...kind of echoes in my poems too...i do hope they still do when my brows are as furrowed as yours.

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Henry Brown 10 October 2009

A 10++++ Bob Well done

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Pregnant with profoundity from the sperm of simplicty.

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Aziz Alkaabi 24 September 2009

There is some metaphoric complexity, here, there are no tears for past events to fill up dry lakes of discontent, and my now happy smile, helps smooth the waters of my still much wrinkled face. And some enchanting conclusion; Flowers of hope have opened, blossoms of bliss bloomed, and seas of tranquillity and peace now fill my soul and my heart is filled with love. All thoughts of past and future visit me again as I read this beautiful poem'

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

bring a realisation that to be happy I must only live now, in present moment, Rachel Ann Butler

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Matt Mooney 16 September 2009

Brilliant piece of philosophy in a well crafted poem.

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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

Happiness is claimed, as it arrives in its fullest. Beautiful with a warm touch.

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Lady Grace 22 August 2009

this piece is beautiful..nicelywritten..a happy person has a good heart..

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Michael Moorcroft 19 August 2009

Wow! ! Love the comparisons of nature and you.10++

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Sameera Sameer 19 August 2009

NO Comment...! ! what a poem...

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Subroto Chatterjee 14 August 2009

I find it more challenging to live WITH happiness....once you find it ofcourse...But who's going to give it to you? Its about something we play hide and seek with.... Oh, we do love games.....! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Vandavasu Vittal 11 August 2009

Fine elegant poetry you have got over there but sometimes I think each moment fading away let it be joy or woe but woe remains the most profound one in our memory do you agree?

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Andrew Blakemore 08 August 2009

A really beautiful poem Bob, outstanding use of metaphor, just brilliant. Best wishes, Andrew

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 August 2009

lovely bob...tells a lot could read betweem words...a wonderful poem...i take it into my favs

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David Harris 06 August 2009

Bob, I hope those blossoms of bliss keep blooming for a long time come my friend. An awesome poem. Top marks and thank for sharing it dear friend. David

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Mimi Fakhira 05 August 2009

Your poems are always a blast to read! This one is beating with life and swirling with experiences, yes, there are many lessons that can be learned from this poem. Love it! 10+++++

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M A 04 August 2009

Congratulations to a very happy person, and making others happy to. Beautiful at any age: live now, in present moment, for as each moment dies, for me, a new one is born.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 August 2009

You have reached the other shore, swimming across the troubled water of pain and joy.........you have reached the shore of peace............a good write.......

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Vaibhav Pandey 04 August 2009

very inspiring poem Bob sir......lessons must be learned from this poem...I loved it....10

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dr veenaa rai 04 August 2009

true, life is in this moment. life is in positivity, creativity, , accepting oneself as one is, learning from life...you ve summed it up so beautifully...10+,

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