Wednesday, July 9, 2008

A Happy Pair. Comments

Rating: 2.8

I will love again; I will.
Not a soul is safe.
I'll throw my heart unto the world:
I'll share it for I've faith.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Sid John Gardner. 17 July 2008

Hi Kyle, Neat write.The Soul is rarely given even in love....What usually happens is that its stolen..used and handed back like an old used bedsheet.. All the best young person. Sid.

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Saint Cynosure 16 July 2008

Kyle this is very good, I enjoyed it immensely.

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Tai Chi Italy 16 July 2008

What a great poem Kyle! thank you for making my day shine. All we can do is keep trying and as to the blood! well there rarely no blood shed somewhere in love and war! smiling at you, Tai

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Tia Maria 13 July 2008

I love this - like Tom said :) hehe

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blue 802 09 July 2008

'not a soul is safe'nice piece, made me smile

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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