I am just one day old
Birthed last night at 12 o'clock
I was in mother's womb for twelve months
When I opened my eyes, it was still dark
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2. The first dawn of the New Year can not be painted more brightly. Exquisite
What a marvellous poem. Very very interesting. Intelligently crafted. Loved it. Top score, Bharati.
What a novel way to write about the birth of a new year. You always come through with originality and picture-painting words. Glad you persevered and posted this poem for us to read and contemplate.500000 stars my dear and faving it
Dear Susan Williams! Your comments with so much enthusiasm always bring smile to my face.We were missing you a lot.Wish you a Very Happy New Year 2023!
Wonderful poem on the occasion of the new year 2023! Well done... Congrats!
Lovely cute New Year Poem....liked...Wish Very Many Happy Years Ahead And A Long Peaceful Life To You And Your Family Bharati