Wednesday, December 30, 2009

A Happy New-Year To All Comments

Rating: 5.0

the year end
is in a nostalgic mood.,
where the old year
is covered with a shroud..
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ritty patnaik
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Ejaz Khan 09 January 2010

The book of life is full of suspense, where each year is like an unread page, hope that this particular page will turn exciting and joyous, powerful enough to lift the gloom and sorrow of gone by pages, a lovely write, ritty, keep shining! 10

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Jean Dament 03 January 2010

A lovely poem that brings hope to the New Year ahead of us. Your poem has a great natural flow to it. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year to You! Spiritsong

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Mamta Agarwal 02 January 2010

Ritti, your poems have a rhythm and music, and the style such that one reads it aloud. moving on with your best foot forward happy new year.thanks for your lovely message. Mamta

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John Knight 30 December 2009

Hi Ritty - Nice Poem - Lovely rhythm and rhyme. I score it a TEN, V 1 Nostalgia and 'Looking forward to something new! ' a nice balance. V 2 A positive resolution! 'Forget the past - Forget the pain' V 3 A touch of caution - and a touch of Faith - awesome. 'With a quickening heart - and with God's blessing - hope it will be the BEST, Love in Poetry - JOHN

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