the year end
is in a nostalgic mood.,
where the old year
is covered with a shroud..
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A lovely poem that brings hope to the New Year ahead of us. Your poem has a great natural flow to it. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year to You! Spiritsong
Ritti, your poems have a rhythm and music, and the style such that one reads it aloud. moving on with your best foot forward happy new year.thanks for your lovely message. Mamta
Hi Ritty - Nice Poem - Lovely rhythm and rhyme. I score it a TEN, V 1 Nostalgia and 'Looking forward to something new! ' a nice balance. V 2 A positive resolution! 'Forget the past - Forget the pain' V 3 A touch of caution - and a touch of Faith - awesome. 'With a quickening heart - and with God's blessing - hope it will be the BEST, Love in Poetry - JOHN
The book of life is full of suspense, where each year is like an unread page, hope that this particular page will turn exciting and joyous, powerful enough to lift the gloom and sorrow of gone by pages, a lovely write, ritty, keep shining! 10