Thursday, January 1, 2015

A Happy New Year Comments

Rating: 4.9

Leaving frustrations and terror behind,
Another year, so cruel and so unkind,
Has now entered in the dark black hole,
Still dances on earth its porn whole sole,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 03 January 2015

A Beautiful poem on eve of New Year. Yes, I too used to believe in predictions and calculations. I used to read all the magazines, watch TV whole night calculating my predictions of future. But...Just every thing happened in opposite. I brought the new year calendar today, otherwise i keep looking for new year calendar to see the whole predictions. This bad habit I changed in this new year. No more to predictions. But if anyone asks I make rough calculations and tell them. Your poem just reminded me today again regarding the predictions. What's going on today in the world is really painful. Beautiful presentation and loved reading each lines. Wishing you too a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2015! God Bless us all.

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Valsa George 02 January 2015

A Man of wisdom and reasoning power cannot close the eyes against the harsh realities! Last year has seen many unfortunate incidents! Terrorism has been unleashed to an alarming level! So we cannot expect the New Year to be very smooth and bright! The natural apprehensions of a sensitive soul! Still you hope and pray for a beautiful year! A great write!

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Khalid Saifullah 02 January 2015

A sad picture of a nation adversely affected by the terror..............10

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 January 2015

It's a truth but let us hope the best..................10

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Bisma Mirza 02 January 2015

True that..... Superb poem... Happy New Year :)

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Bisma Mirza 02 January 2015

true that..... Superb poem! ! H@ppy New Year :)

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Heather Wilkins 01 January 2015

every thing will change in time happy new year to your and your family nicely penned

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Micha Memory Asime 01 January 2015

Not all new things bring good tidings...a good poem summing up all our woes and woos

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 January 2015

In winter's midnight one falls and another rises and this way goes on timeless time giving birth to hopes and despairs yet let's be hopeful for the best and keep on living life to the last breath........Akhtarji.....very nicely composed...10.......Wish u and your family a Happy and Prosperous New Year 2015!

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