Saturday, March 1, 2014

A Happy Moment Comments

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Awake in the morning, a chilled morning;
Cold breeze sneaking through the window,
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Tanmay Kumar Sankhua 08 March 2014

A fantastic poem with the beauty of Nature................

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 March 2014

A Wonderful poem. You have covered the whole universe here. Yes, this is the happy moment or rather one can say priceless moment, one should definitely dream, cherish and love...I loved reading each lines. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 02 March 2014

And as I prayed, came the sweet revelations of bright and beautiful sun shining….! That was the priceless moment, Of blissfulness, I dreamed, cherished and loved....... Indeed a timeless moment of serenity and bliss! So at the end of your day's pilgrimage, you were blessed with the overwhelming felicity! ! Enjoyed much! !

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Shraddha The Poetess 01 March 2014

a nice poem.....with lots of positivity............................. we should always kep on hoping as hope is rope................................. a message conveying poem....

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