Friday, March 26, 2010

A Happy Ending Comments

Rating: 4.3

The happy ending
she was convinced was finally hers
once so strong, so sure
now wobbles, threatens to fall
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Alyssa Lippi
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Darren Woods 23 May 2014

And again Petal, you seem to be constantly heart broken, let down - I have read a lot of your writings and have come to this conclusion and believe a Mr Right is out there for you. You will find him.

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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

Somewhat cliche, but a good poem all in all

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Raju Baruah 09 April 2010

oh it's directly flows from your heart...like a river...and touch the pearl indeed...thanks

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Elisabeth Perry 08 April 2010

I like this poem...It is deep, and true. You get your self up for a happy ending and then get let down..I've seen it too many times. Great poem :)

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