A Happy Ending Comments
raised by wrong
strengthened by lies
toughened by stares
from hateful eyes
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Alright, you still need to work out on your sentence structure, choice of right words and theme.The message of a happy ending is not strong enough.As a whole, you do have a talent.Keep it up Rudi.
please comment on this poem. i am a novice and would love some guidelines
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7/27/2025 8:18:20 AM # 1.0.0
Your opening stanza is very powerful. Sustain your style throughout as you change the mood.