My mother stands at the screen door, laughing.
“Out out damn Spot,” she commands our silly dog.
I wonder what this means. I rise into adult air
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I can't believe no one has commented on this before! I was utterly entranced from the first line to the last. What images, what beautiful, sad, happy, desolate, uplifting and simply breathtaking images. I will keep this just for the pleasure of it. Thank you for writing this, it's a joy. 11/10
Childhood re-lived through this poem, we all have our own childhood and when we read such poems we go back to those days...10