A Happy Burial Comments

i think i follow your reasoning, but NOT ALL of the past can or should be buried. at least not too deeply. of course, if you mean past as in unfortunate mistakes, and nasty speech and actions, then, by all means bury those. i would make two or three very minor edits, but i liked it. thanks. my favorite line: And this shall coil and entomb us in a web YIKES! bri :)

Beautiful poem on burying past and sailing into future with bright hope. Loved reading each lines.

Great write Rajesh.... beautiful diction...and impressive presentation! Yes, let us bury the past and set sail to a new direction! Top marks

Whenever I read your poems I feel joy. A kind of innocence is always there in your write!

Let this be the rule for good life by planting the past for better tree of tomorrow.......very nicely composed with excellent diction.......10