Sunday, October 19, 2008

A Happy Accident Comments

Rating: 3.5

A happy accident

Alone. Alone always alone
The warmth of love I’d never known.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Michael Brock 18 April 2010

Very well done, beautifully written and passionately felt thanks for sharing Michael

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Bursting with beauty my friend. I always like a happy ending.

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Aira Olayvar 03 January 2010

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! what a story! very smart written... ;)

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

To love and be loved in return A lesson that we had to learn. Rachel Ann Butler

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Naidz Ladia 30 April 2009

a very honest and smart poem...a close-related to reality..my gosh, ..i wish you all happiness thru out your life, , , hope ur wife, kids will be always fine...GOD will always watching from up above...i do hope u would be a good samaritan to everybody...i love u and ur family....naizz

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Costa Anakiev 08 February 2009

sir igor, if it's about your own life, it's a greatly described autobiography.

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C. P. Sharma 07 February 2009

Sir, the turning point of life with golden touches of your pen. Love is by accident found, Once have, it raps around. All happiness in it bound, It gives life meaning profound. Thanks for sharing it. CP

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Tabo Mwangelwa 14 January 2009

Sir, I think the poem is adorable, I feel it's the sweetest thing. I like the way you've managed to rhyme and how you've built it to the end. And also, I really find the opening line effective. The full stop after the Alone really places the word alone.

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Fay Slimm 31 October 2008

Good composition here Ivor, and the title too is well chosen. The flow of the piece takes the reader nicely into the very positive ending and the honesty of the whole draws the heart into the experience, whether personal or imaginative this is a well construed poetic piece. Thank you. best wishes from Fay.

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Onelia Avelar 26 October 2008

I couldn't help remembering Oliver Twist while reading this, though here is no social element, just a sad private story told in a fine manner. Lovely composed with an optimistic end. (I found this piece by accident too, glad to read it) Best regards, onelia

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Ben Gieske 24 October 2008

Very nicely composed. Reads very smoothly and in a poem story style. More than just an accident, an opportunity recogniced, accepted, and lived with a promise.

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Reshma Ramesh 19 October 2008

aweee........ so simple sad and sweet.......nice

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