A Happy Accident Comments

Very well done, beautifully written and passionately felt thanks for sharing Michael

Bursting with beauty my friend. I always like a happy ending.

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! what a story! very smart written... ;)

To love and be loved in return A lesson that we had to learn. Rachel Ann Butler

a very honest and smart poem...a close-related to reality..my gosh, ..i wish you all happiness thru out your life, , , hope ur wife, kids will be always fine...GOD will always watching from up above...i do hope u would be a good samaritan to everybody...i love u and ur family....naizz

sir igor, if it's about your own life, it's a greatly described autobiography.

Sir, the turning point of life with golden touches of your pen. Love is by accident found, Once have, it raps around. All happiness in it bound, It gives life meaning profound. Thanks for sharing it. CP

Sir, I think the poem is adorable, I feel it's the sweetest thing. I like the way you've managed to rhyme and how you've built it to the end. And also, I really find the opening line effective. The full stop after the Alone really places the word alone.

Good composition here Ivor, and the title too is well chosen. The flow of the piece takes the reader nicely into the very positive ending and the honesty of the whole draws the heart into the experience, whether personal or imaginative this is a well construed poetic piece. Thank you. best wishes from Fay.

I couldn't help remembering Oliver Twist while reading this, though here is no social element, just a sad private story told in a fine manner. Lovely composed with an optimistic end. (I found this piece by accident too, glad to read it) Best regards, onelia

Very nicely composed. Reads very smoothly and in a poem story style. More than just an accident, an opportunity recogniced, accepted, and lived with a promise.

aweee........ so simple sad and sweet.......nice