A Haphazard, Tattered Torn Heart! Comments

I love (Tattered Torn Heart) , I've used that in my poetry as well, it's also in a rhythm & Blues song. Tattered Torn, Love it---Melvina

'A haphazardness venture in time', this line doesn't sound right to me. I think it should read 'A haphazard venture in time' in order to make any sense. I found this to be an intertesting and heart felt poem but needs a little fine tuning. Kind regards Gyp's