Thursday, September 7, 2006

A Hand On Her Gown: The Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Peace is not a betrayal of this beloved
Peace is a not a mere humming song.
Peace is my lovely girl
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 26 January 2015

Hope you remember me again and again......that is peace and it is great writing.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 30 August 2013

A very thought provoking poem

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a beautiful poem for the love and the peace which surely will remember the loving waiting hearts..these hearts are the one who will create their virtue universe..well done..

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Manonton Dalan 07 September 2008

love, pride and happiness put into one. nice poem. thank you for sharing.md

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Indira Babbellapati 04 July 2008

finally all of us do enjoy the embrace of peace, don't we?

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Josie Whitehead 29 June 2007

Peace lies in your heart - no, it is not a humming song or a betrayal. Exactly right. These are lovely sentiments.

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Amanda May Moore 27 June 2007

Peace is in knowing love. -lovely

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Sandra Fowler 16 June 2007

Wonderful title. Fabulous poem. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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BEAU GOLDEN 29 May 2007

Kee this is a beautiful signature piece of work! beau

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Kavita Bhat 05 January 2007

hi, your perspective on peace is awesome!

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Aldo Kraas 04 January 2007

Any girl should be lovely And should be treated like a gentle flower This poem is wonderfil It is well written

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Selina Tan 31 October 2006

i like the way you animated peace. Very forward and direct yet precise. The style and structure is simple and doesn't bore the reader with description but the substance did not suffer. great poem.

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Trinity K 16 October 2006

its so lovely to see someone craving for peace....tranquility? inner? or this turmoil is not of your making, , , , , wait to see balance return...it will, thampi.....

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Anne Jojo 07 October 2006

reaally cooool! Kee the only way i can describe most of u'r poems, the ones i've read... pure silk! and thanx 4 u'r comments on my poem

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Nina Joseph 27 September 2006

i never imagined how you potrayed peace like, from the love of a girl.This is a great picture language, a very fantastic knowledge in poem.Great art!

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Anjana Aravind 13 September 2006

True, this one is the best. Anjana

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Sylvia Spencer 13 September 2006

Hi Kee this poem is your best yet. Nalini is right this is just great and you will get better and better because you have a great gift of words. cheers Sylvie

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Nalini Hebbar 07 September 2006

you have improved so much...thampi...this is your best poem...love...nalini

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 September 2006

Beautiful piece, Thampi..A strong statement well expressed...Smooth fluxion, well structured...All around fine crafted work''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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