Peace is not a betrayal of this beloved
Peace is a not a mere humming song.
Peace is my lovely girl
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a beautiful poem for the love and the peace which surely will remember the loving waiting hearts..these hearts are the one who will create their virtue universe..well done..
love, pride and happiness put into one. nice poem. thank you for sharing.md
finally all of us do enjoy the embrace of peace, don't we?
Peace lies in your heart - no, it is not a humming song or a betrayal. Exactly right. These are lovely sentiments.
Wonderful title. Fabulous poem. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
Any girl should be lovely And should be treated like a gentle flower This poem is wonderfil It is well written
i like the way you animated peace. Very forward and direct yet precise. The style and structure is simple and doesn't bore the reader with description but the substance did not suffer. great poem.
its so lovely to see someone craving for peace....tranquility? inner? or this turmoil is not of your making, , , , , wait to see balance return...it will, thampi.....
reaally cooool! Kee the only way i can describe most of u'r poems, the ones i've read... pure silk! and thanx 4 u'r comments on my poem
i never imagined how you potrayed peace like, from the love of a girl.This is a great picture language, a very fantastic knowledge in poem.Great art!
Hi Kee this poem is your best yet. Nalini is right this is just great and you will get better and better because you have a great gift of words. cheers Sylvie
you have improved so much...thampi...this is your best poem...love...nalini
Beautiful piece, Thampi..A strong statement well expressed...Smooth fluxion, well structured...All around fine crafted work''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr
Hope you remember me again and again......that is peace and it is great writing.