Tuesday, October 7, 2008

A Hand Comments

Rating: 2.8

First Love's Touch,
mutual gathering was only through them,
our Hands.
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Lonnie Hicks
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Adeline Foster 14 August 2013

A good job here. Interesting style. Read mine - . Brush Strokes - Adeline

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Bri Edwards 05 July 2013

i agree about the importance of hands to most humans, but it is true about lots of body parts, and some people actually manage somehow with one or no hands............ well, not without special measures of course. i would not want to need to use toilet paper without having hands! sorry. i got carried away with myself. the poem is interesting and helps us perhaps to appreciate something else we usually take for granted. i would suggest a second look at your line: with be with these two hands, and: to express what what my Heart says thanks for sharing.

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Bursting with a beauty friend. You have made the mondane marvalous with this tremendous tribute to two of our best friends that we often take for granted!

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Chitra - 31 January 2009

enchanting words...well done

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