Monday, August 13, 2007

A Hallucination Comments

Rating: 5.0

Suddenly you can scan in the dark
Seeing above flies a lurking lark
But becomes blind at the sunrise
The blaze blocks heavenly skies.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Jemarie Ragudo 16 August 2007

To make possible an impossible is a possibility I would like to make. Now I am making impossibly crazy comments. That means your poem affected my sanity. Very good work!

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Original Unknown Girl 14 August 2007

I love this Marvin, it speaks volumes and yet it is so pure in it's thoughts.... great work. HG: -) xx

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