Saturday, November 4, 2006

A Hallowed Heartless Heart Only Once Was Ever Mine. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lo' these many many years i've been disavowed from my heart...
Hurriedly left a careless depart.

Was this my evil part? ...
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Michael Gale
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Patti Masterman 04 November 2006

I love this poem. I am in such awe. It is so tremendous and subtle at the same time. What a masterpiece. Congratulations on this.

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Frank James Ryan, Jr. 04 November 2006

Very Descriptive! Loved it! If you are interested, I wrote a short story called 'The Railroad Pup' just today. Anyhow, i gave you a ten on this. it was well deserved! great job! :) -Lauren xoxoxoxox

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

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