A Half-Smoked Cigarette In The Rain Comments

this is deep and powerful..! absolutely incredible writing.. love this so much, thank you sharing, keep writing.. :) love

The rain and the distraction were just what you needed. Enjoyed reading.

Glad you met you Angel that day, and a very well deserved Poem of the Day.

Now all alone! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A nice poem on college life, this stage of life is really confusing, neither you enjoy life nor you are naive.

A wonderful stroll down the memory lane . Congrats on the poem of the Day.

This is a beautiful poem! i agree with poetess Jasbir, a poem gets more value when it is interpreted by readers from different angles in varied dimensions! Congratulations for this wonderful poem being selected as POD!

It's a nice poem; congrats on being selected as the POD; you don't, however, need to clarify a poem, like you have done here...let the readers draw their own conclusions and enjoy the flow of the poem...

Like last year when I cried this rain in tears Your circuit's dead again I should have told you I'm scared of losing people...love, infatuation, its problems that occupy one's mind.. leaving the half smoked cigarette behind.. the one i met is the one sent by an angel......... very fine images. tony

I read the confusion and the muddled thinking in the poem and in the long explanation, as well. A poem should focus and aim at a central point, so I see this poem as an exercise which will lead ultimately to a clearer view of life.

A nice poem for POD. Congratulations

plain narration of unruly college life// nice story // burning cigarette smoke whirling up rain drops are falling by turn drizzling to storming drenched everything put out the fire left on the ground half-smoked........

Story of a half love and romance, nicely compared with a half smoked cigarette and a match stick. The poetess wrote a poem in a different style. It's lovely selection as member's poem. she deserves congratulations and I congratulate her.

A well written poem of the day. Congrats, dear Julie for being chosen...10+++

Beautiful poem...Congrats......