O God!
Perhaps you were when annoyed of your full shyness,
that was the cause of your restlessness.
How many years you passed.
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What a wonderful expression dear Jawadji! Full of inspiration and joyness. God has created girl beautiful and with shyness which attract the lover. Beautifully composed. Thanks.
THE GAL IS REALLY CREATED BY GOD ONLY BEAUTIFULLER THAN MANY BOYS ALSO AKHTAR JAWAD
A wonderful poem, fabulous poetic imagination with dazzling expression…I would love to quote: But you veiled this portrait until you created a lover to admire and love this work of art.! Thanks a lot for sharing dear sir…10
Woman the most beautiful creation of God... Excellent poem Akhtar
AKHTA JANABH IS SO BUSY HE DOESN'T REPLY OFTENLY SO BE HAPPY READING HIS POETRY SOME DAY REPLAY YOU MAY GET MAYBE RINI don't suffer in anxiety when you want a comment read me I eply 1000 percent if u dont get a reply soonly PM me Rini Jerry
Very beautiful girl (woman?) .... But you veiled this portrait until you created a lover to admire and love this work of art. And when you put the best of your love in the bosom of a lover you unveiled the portrait of this half shy woman. Very much an adorable photo and a poem....thank you....thanks a lot for your valuable comment on me as a poetess too...I feel honoured a lot Akhtar....thank you