Thursday, January 27, 2005

A Hair Brush Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadows are cricling around my head
And i cannot bother to sink deeper
Revolt shines through my bare bones
but who i can oppress i know not
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Michael Witkowski
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John Tiong Chunghoo 25 March 2006

a very subtle poem. it needs a lot thought to come out with subtlety like this. i still long to write in ease like this.

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