Thursday, June 25, 2009

A Haiku Selection Comments

Rating: 3.7

A gentle wind blows
Across the meadows and fields
Tossing leaves around
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Sandra Martyres
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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

excellent haikus Sandra. This is more difficult than appears to the eye. nice work.

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Patti Masterman 25 August 2009

Your haiku are so beautiful. I admit the ability to write one flees from me. There is no brevity bone anywhere in my body. It was left out at the beginning of time. (smile)

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 01 August 2009

Picture-poems well painted and penned.10.

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Or Nath 06 July 2009

hai............nice to see the squirrel with hiding nut

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Estrella Baldemosa 04 July 2009

i love your haikus........

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Catrina Heart 04 July 2009

These were all stunning haikus written...Fabulous craft! !

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

good work...thanks Sandra

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Indira Babbellapati 01 July 2009

first and last my favz...

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all three are beautifully done..the pictures were perfect

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2009

Picture perfect Sandra....you continue to amaze me my lovely....very well composed Haiku.....a wonderful triplet shows your brilliance

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The beauty of Haiku is expressed so well here Sandra. The words bring images to my mind instantly and I can see the animals amongst nature's bounty. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Marvelous pieces.

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Carl Harris 25 June 2009

This is a perfect Haiku triplet on unrelated subject, Sandra, and all are flawlessly written and expressed quite beautifully. You are the first person I have read in a good while to have written four consectutive perfect haiku poems. Most don't know the difference between haiku and senryu. Obviously, you do. Carl.

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Carol Gall 25 June 2009

very beautiful i can see your words

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Fiona Davidson 25 June 2009

This is beautiful Sandra...wonderful images...Fi 10+++

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