Tuesday, January 27, 2009

A Haiku Of Terror Comments

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Vaibhav Pandey
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Ritty Patnaik 27 July 2009

more than the taliban, i am terrorised with this wonderful haiku, , , expressing such a big concept, in few words.impressed!

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Nikunj Sharma 14 July 2009

9 words and their world a worthy poets imagination at it's best dont put it to test.... wonderful........sau number milenge appko pandey ji

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Wonderful 10+

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Isaiah Grey 08 May 2009

Ah, the beauty of haiku - so much said in so few words. Perfect!

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Catrina Heart 10 February 2009

great meaningful write................10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 February 2009

Very true. Beautifully said, dost. Thank you.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

Its like an empty room.....you'd leave the room rather empty.

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Eddie Roa 01 February 2009

a well employed irony in your haiku. like it.

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Muhammad Ali 31 January 2009

simply the heart touching! excellent work done bro! +10

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Goran Gustafsson 31 January 2009

I'm 100% with you on this one. /gg

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finely said... thoughtful of the youth

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Bob Blackwell 31 January 2009

I always ask, whose rules God or mans. Fine sentiments. Bob

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Subbaraman N V 31 January 2009

A fine haiku! Thanks for sharing!

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Seema Aarella 31 January 2009

A thing of beauty is joy for ever....woman being the most beautiful thing god has created...should not be covered with oppression, , , her beauty so is deprived of the appreciation of her admirer and her own vision of things is also blurred by the veil.

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Excellent point! ! ! ! ! !

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Andrew Blakemore 30 January 2009

You make the point very well indeed between the ideal and the harsh reality. Best wishes, Andrew

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Kite Remedy 29 January 2009

Short and smooth, sharp as a razor the idea is.. Nicely penned

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Js Black 29 January 2009

Tyranny at it's finest...such truth in just a few words. Great job....Jeff.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 January 2009

a history told in those three lines...lovely

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 29 January 2009

A very thoughtful and deep write. shanmugam

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