A Haiku Comments

A snapshot can be worth a thousand words!

deep words of meaning in life and brevity. very fine poem. tony

A concise and insightful bit of verse. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Lorraine.

:) can you tell what i'm thinking? ?

i hope my vote is registered. Tried twice

Haiku beautifully explained in form of a haiku. Just perfect. I vote it 10

brevity in thought conveying great meanings, . thank you very much for this Haiku. tony

Beautiful Haiku. Short and Sweet enriched with profound meaning. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

Very nice Haiku the poet taking the reader on the journey with her.10

A snapshot of a thought caught beautifully Lorraine. Best wishes, Andrew

The way you use small words to make such bigger and deeper meanings come to life is amazing! +10

Really words in depth, lovely thanks 10+

I love Haiku's and this one was stunning. I can't wait to read more of your works.

A haiku type of poem... Simple like a quote, but more deeper meaning... I'll write like one of those.. ;) Thumbs UP! ! !

a quick flash of words so aptly illuminating the very idea of the haiku

A wonderful cognitive American haiku...bravo

Although your syllable count of 5-7-5 is correct, Lorraine, this is technically not a haiku but a senryu poem. A haiku is only about nature, nothing else. A senryu is about anything else except nature. Both are always written in the 5-7-5 syllable style. Still, I enjoyed this well written and expressed senryu poem very much. Carl.

Lorraine I enjoyed the provocation of thought in this haiku...eternal vs. the moment.....and which has more meaning in the end......thanks for sharing your talent and insight

Short but solid and substantive. Thanks for sharing.

Contains so many aspects of a good haiku. I am still trying to master it. So I read others hoping to translate the secret. I am sure I will find your haiku insipiring.