Saturday, July 11, 2009

A Gypsy Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

this body is the home,
of a gypsy mind
this mind is always alone.!
it's home, under the blue sky,
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ritty patnaik
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Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Ritty, this is a lovely poem, full of sympathy and understanding for the life of a gypsy. Bob

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Saadat Tahir 14 July 2009

be back with a longer comment...later cheers

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Saadat Tahir 14 July 2009

oh rittyji its such a beautiful poem...levitation if ever it was i could write a few pages straight on this..... but suffice...its very very beautiful p[oetry...and i really enjoyed it cheers and ten

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Ejaz Khan 12 July 2009

A beautiful write with a good start and wonderful ending.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 July 2009

Beautiful poem. I love the last stanza most.

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Rakesh Bedi 12 July 2009

Opening stanza is very nice.........none can penetrate her loneliness......; you mean mind enjoys the loneliness to hold her head regal n high?

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