A Gun With A Hair Trigger Comments

OK! to MyPoemList! bri :)

i liked when you repeated the beginnings of lines. :) bri

SO, did the law or the criminal element do you in/out? ? Elena, Let Me Explaina NO, .....it's not Guiseppi speaking. It's only Bri, into your life peeking. SO, you were a scrapper, a punk, a no-good gal.......with lots of spunk. You fought (sometimes to survive) , and killed a few? Maybe five? ? And then somethin' changed; your mind was rearranged, ....but... it was too late to leave it all 'clean'. (You'd been a force, often mean.) But you DID leave it behind for good, when you were shot dead by a hood. No R.I.P. for Elena. Hell's waiting for YOU. Some old 'friends' are waitin'. A few...... dozen. bri :)