A Gun Lies Close By. Comments

Its very deep and it makes you think about everything that can happen unexpectedly. Amazing. I would love to chat with you sometime

teenager on her bed shot right though her head A boat abandoned in the water this young girl someone's daughter rhythmic verse... good to read and enjoy

wow. i like your use of diction. its very dark and really makes you think. keep it up, keep it real.

That's a dark and morbid poem...I love it! ! !