Monday, July 31, 2006

A Guiding Whisper Comments

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Ah! My mind often brings me behind,
To the unpolluted visionary age,
When my heart wished to dissolve,
Physical entity of my own being,
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Muhammad Shanazar
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Uzma Jamil 20 November 2008

where have you brought these thoughts 4m: the heart or the soul? truly uzma

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Joe Breunig 31 July 2006

A compelling, passionate poem; very enjoyable; I too loved last four lines.

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Anastasia Prescott 31 July 2006

Picking up a few thorns from the path, Where from advances mankind, With bare sore feet is much better, Than the seclusion of seventy years YOU ARE A GENIUS. really admire this thinking mind

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