Tuesday, August 18, 2009

A Guiding Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

directionless
i wonder,
what is to become of me,
a insecure dot,
...
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ritty patnaik
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Ejaz Khan 25 August 2009

A lovely write Ritty, what would life be without hope and the mercy of the One, a have accomplished another meaningful task by writing a great devotional poem!

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Winnie Angel 24 August 2009

Ritty loved ya meaningful write.....Winnie

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Milica Franchi De Luri 24 August 2009

Hello Ritty, Yes i agree with all the comments made by the other poets and might add that i expected nothing less from such accomplished poet like yourself. Beautiful write my friend. Milica xx

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Saadat Tahir 24 August 2009

ritty...its a p-henomenal poem so close to life....every line a decade every stanza a life time...and so much laterality...so much spread...hard to grasp.... ardent words.... deeply felt impressed and enjoyed it tc...here ten

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Vaibhav Pandey 23 August 2009

a wonderful poem ma'm.......beautifully expressed....loved it...10

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Raj Nandy 20 August 2009

Stars have been a source of guidance for us humans for centuries! The Three Wise Men were guided by a bright star to Bethlehem! The ancient Egyptians and the Babylonians read the stars! A good poem! 10! -Raj PS. There is a beautiful song by Perry Como; - ' Cathch a falling starlight put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy day! ' I am writing a poem on Perry soon!

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A superb inspirational poem Ritty coming from darkness to daylight. When we know we are all part of nature and each other with love it is a great turning point. This is extremely well written and a guiding light for others. 10 love Karin

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Bob Blackwell 20 August 2009

We need to read poems of inspiration like this one, it brings a warm glow to my heart, yes we should all follow our stars and join in the magnificence of the universe, the place where all souls combine. Wonderful poem, you are a very good poet Ritty. Thank you it has given me a good start to my day. Love Bob

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Rakesh Bedi 18 August 2009

A nice one, ritty.........

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